Thursday, June 10, 2010
Dreams of night terrors
Distracting lust lured me into the realm in which chaos consumed your limbs. Distaste fills my senses, fuelled with faith in hope for us, I ventured through the trenches of hate, the jungle of fear and the valley of loss only to be pushed beyond the threshold that contains my sanity. Devoured by chaos I fought my way into the stomach of the foul beast to retrieve you, I put my life to extremities to retrieve the very thought of you, as a final pledge of my love for you I tore out my heart and smothered chaos with that love for you. Deprived of my infinite heart and eternal faith in hope for us, we escaped the dark realm of chaos in each others arms, only to be woken by a smothering blanket and sweat ridden body. Dreaming of you again.
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" I put my life to extremities to retrieve the very thought of you"
ReplyDeletevery nice!
god damn i wish i could write like this
ReplyDeleteThanks =D I'm glad that you like them, I'm sure anyone could write like this if they chose to, it's white I think is the equivalent of minimalism in the visual arts world, it rewuires the basic thoughts based on raw emotion, if you leave your thoughts to think for too long then they become somewhat contaminated with over thinking of words and complicated sentences to describe and amplify your raw emotion which I find that in turn it will eradicate the raw emotion as it is not raw anymore, it's been filtered through your mind. I like to think of it as a direct path from your senses to the rest of the world, removing the mind which filters and alters the true emotion... Then again maybe I just like to blable crap
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